Rewrite the StarsChapter 2
Chapter 2 runs about 628 characters and is one of the 3 opening chapters catalogued on this site.
I got more animated as I spoke.
With every sentence, I gripped harder. With every grip, Jaxson’s expression grew darker.
His mocking smile vanished completely. By the end, his face was like a thundercloud.
He squeezed out one word through gritted teeth: "Fine."
I was confused. Why the sudden change of heart? He looked like a man who had been cornered by a blackmailer.
Wait... his leg felt a bit thin. And oddly soft?
"Are you going to stop squeezing my hand yet?!" Jaxson finally snapped, his voice tight.
I yanked my hand back.
Oh. My. God.
That wasn't his leg.
I had just grabbed the "Prince of the Hill" in a very, very wrong place.